各位老师好,原文如下:
John had a very good day and put his wallet containing £3000 into the microwave oven for safekeeping. Then he and Jane went horse-riding. When they got home, Jane cooked their dinner in the microwave oven and without realizing it , cooked her fiances wallet as well.
请各位老师帮忙看下第三句的and连接的并列成分,我觉得正确的语序应该为:and cooked her fiances wallet as well without realizing it. 将状语提前加个逗号就变成了原文,
像原文的那种结构,会产生两个谓语的感觉(逗号后直接加谓语动词),如此在语法上是不是有失严谨
第二个问题:
without realizing it 这个短语中的it是指第一句话中发生的事件,还是单纯指钱包,关于这个短语可否理解为插入语(PS:我见过的插入语放句中一般前后都有逗号隔开,一个逗号是不是也行)
谢谢各位老师
When they got home, Jane cooked their dinner in the microwave oven and without realizing it, cooked her fiances wallet as well.
1 and并列的是二个谓语动词cooked...and cooked...,只是第二个谓语动词带了一个介词短语作状语。没有你说的and之后二个谓语的感觉,由于and后只有一个谓语动词cooked。
2 without realizing it这个状语没放在句末,而是放在了and和cook之间有二个缘由:1)强调状语;2)防止歧义。假如这个状语放在句末,则大概状语同时修饰二个谓语动词。放在and和第二个谓语动词之间,则只有一种可能——修饰第二个谓语动词,与第一个谓语动词无关。介词短语作状语坐落于动词之前,要读升调,是一个独立的语调群(和意群),此时一般有停顿,书面语用逗号。
3 it并非指wallet,而是指cooked her fiances wallet这件事。代词可以指代前面提及的人或事,这种使用方法称为代词的后照应。也可以指代后面才提及的人或事,这种使用方法称为代词的前照应。本句中的it为前照应指代。